Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Jaylim Narrate

Walt: write a narrative Walt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full  

One hot day Jaylim wanted to go on a trip. he wanted to go kayaking so then he asked his mum and dad if they could go and they said yes.

So then Jaylim Ran to his friend and asked them if they wanted to go and so they went into the van  when they got out of the van they put on there life jacket. And jumped into the boat and grabbed their pedals and started to pedal away but then there.

Was a big wave came and tipped over the boat but then we saw a rope and we use it to tiy it around a strike tied it to the a pole so they don't go down a waterfall and then they lived happily ever after.

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